a collection of ideas and below it a try out of idea number 1 of the storyhave fun reading its my first story so im open for criticalso if you guys have better names or a beter title just write it im in need it Statistics Overall Score .star-4447-overall-cffb0010e7794c5b9af5f6b79a02361e:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 1,676 Average Views : 838 Followers : 0 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 0 Pages : 4 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author