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The Milky Way Galaxy is under the control of the Mihryol Empire. They were once human but evolved with machine and flesh as the components and they rule the galaxy with an iron fist, eradicating all life that does not submit to their will. This is the story of one soldier who has seen the darkest parts of life and the choices he makes that will affect the universe for generations.I''''m a new writer and this is the first time I have tried writing anything really. I would love criticism as long as its constructive. It would also be helpful if I could have any mistakes pointed out etc. (Mature tag is for gore and violence, I don''''t plan on writing any sexual scenes I feel like it dirties the character) Statistics Overall Score .star-7460-overall-476b85914f0543cabb52185c92667919:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 3,529 Average Views : 882 Followers : 4 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 34 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author