Welcome peoples, this will be my first attempt at writing anything. This is more about fun than anything else. I won't pretend to be fluent at English or have flawless grammar. I will make an effort so that my fan fiction is coherent and enjoyable. Hopefully I'll get better as I go along and receive tips and criticism from all of you. This topic is for the peoples to discuss my story as well as tell me what I've done wrong. I'm thinking that a few chapter in I'll make a topic to show stats/skills chapter by chapter. I'll also make a topic for people to post ideas and suggestions. Of course this is all assuming that I don't fail horribly and find out I have no ability whatsoever to write... in which case I'll go ahead and apologize for in advance.

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  Please be kind to me, WakingDreamer. :grin:

  I forgot to mention this is also my first time posting on a forum so I'm learning things like avatars, coding, signatures, and manners all at once.

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