I have been getting a lot of complaints about the beginning chapters so before releasing any more chapters I will be rewriting the story from the beginning. this time I hope to write it in a way that can make more people happy. there will be a freeze on chapter releases while I do this and to save time I will rewrite it all in a bundle, this delay should not take much time to fix, just a month or two. sorry for the inconvenience this causes on the readers who like it the way it is.

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  note, not much will change, just some minor details and a cleaned up story so people will find it tolerable to read on to the newer chapters where I got a bit better at story telling