So... I need help.

  english is not my native language (I thought I was pretty good at it, to the point of not making one mistake..... but, well, corrected the wrong things I could find)

  Stolen from its rightful place, this narrative is not meant to be on Amazon; report any sightings.

  Any correction is welcome, but if the composition of the phrase itself is wrong please explain why

  I would also like to know if the story is good.

  Is it?

  Is it as original as I thought?

  What can I do to improve?

  Any thought, any comment is helpful.

  Thank you.