I am making this chapter to say that I am doing a COMPLETE re-write of the story. that means that it may keep similar plot points, and names, but it won't be the same story.

  The reason I have decided to rewrite is simple. I don't like how I have the story, and I also barely remember how things were going to progress. I also used way too much exterior help instead of letting it flow how I wanted it to.

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  uh... I don't know how to get the extra characters to post this with... How about I ask you guys to share what you think was good or bad with the existing story. It's nice to get feedback.

  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36422/tayra-v2