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im still in the making

  i would like to know some opinion about my main character

  MAIN CHARACTER

  appearance

  Enoch Grey is an old man with a weathered face and long, wild hair that falls past his shoulders. His beard is shorter than his hair, but still extends to his chest. Despite his weathered appearance, Enoch's body is surprisingly bulky and strong as steel, a testament to the years of experience he has gained in battles over the centuries.. He has a bad posture and walks with a slight limp, but he is surprisingly quick on his feet, moving with a fluidity and grace that belies his age. He wears a long coat that has seen better days, which hangs off his frame as if it were too large for him, but it conceals a multitude of weapons that he has accumulated over the years. Enoch carries himself with an air of indifference, as if he has seen too much and has nothing left to prove.

  Weapon

  Enoch Grey's proficiency in combat extends beyond just his bare hands and objects around him. Due to his ability to respawn after death and retain his memories, he has mastered a wide variety of weapons and fighting styles over the centuries. He can easily adopt new weapons and turn almost any object into a deadly weapon, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant. His expertise in close combat is unmatched, and he combines his awareness and quick reflexes with his mastery of various fighting styles to take down enemies quickly and efficiently. He can easily disarm his opponents and even dislocate their limbs with his bare hands.

  Enoch is also highly adaptive, thanks to his ability. He has been known to use his enemies' bodies, whether dead or alive, as shields or weapons. He can even use the bones of his enemies as weapon or a deadly projectiles.. His foes never know what to expect from him, as he can turn even the most innocuous object into a deadly weapon.

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  Personality

  Enoch Grey is a solitary figure who prefers to keep to himself. He doesn't form attachments to others, not because he doesn't want to put them in danger, but because he knows that he will outlive them all. Being cursed to roam the world for all eternity, he sees no point in forming connections with others that he will eventually outgrow.

  Despite his aloof exterior, Enoch is a deeply empathetic human being who is extremely guarded because he feels too much for everyone around him. He has seen too much pain and suffering in his long life, which has made him cautious about forming relationships. However, when someone is in need, Enoch will do what he can to help them, though he may not always show it in a conventional way.

  He is not a talkative person and prefers to keep his thoughts and feelings to himself. His emotions, however, run deep and intense. They are often veiled under layers of angst, rage, sorrow, and fear.

  Background

  The details of Enoch Grey's past are shrouded in mystery, and any information regarding how he ended up with his curse has been lost to time. Having lived for centuries, Enoch is the only one who knows the truth of his past, and he refuses to share it with others. He has spent his long life wandering the world and fighting countless battles, honing his skills to perfection. However, his immortality has also made him a solitary figure, preferring to keep his distance from others. Despite his reluctance to form connections with people, his reputation as a skilled fighter precedes him, and those who have witnessed his abilities are left in awe.

  Goals:

  Enoch Grey's ultimate goal is to find a way to break his curse and finally be free from the cycle of death and rebirth. He has been searching for centuries, traveling from place to place and seeking out any clues or information that might help him in his quest. Despite the exhaustion and weariness that comes with living for so long, Enoch is driven by his unrelenting desire to escape his fate and find a way to truly live, even if it means risking everything he has left. His journey has taken him to the darkest corners of the world, where he has faced countless dangers and obstacles, but he will not rest until he has found a way to break the curse that has haunted him for so long.

  so i can take notes or if i should stop LOL

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